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I am actually pretty proud of this one. But the formatting, line breaks etc are bugging me. I experimented with it a lot, but eventually just left it as it was originally. Any feedback would be wonderul.

Enjoy :heart:
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The parallel between the dove and the girl was quite pungent. The images are strong. Good poem.