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So this is the 500 word very short story I wrote for my intro to creative writing class. Figured I might as well post it up here. No harm done. There are no rules against posting it places that I know of. :shrug:

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Enjoy! :heart:

Also, I would love critiques please! Any critiques on this will help me for my final short story of about 2,000 words so any feedback would be wonderful! Anything from characterization, dialogue attribution, description, plot, setting, vocab/spelling/grammar etc, recommendations...tell me what you think!

Thank you! :hug:
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That ending feels a bit like foreshadowing, and I'd loved to see it explored. :la: